The song has a good amount of energy. It just need re-classification into Lo-Fi instead of General Rock.
There is some good stuff here!! The progression is good, and the musicianship is solid! The lyric idea is good....would like to hear it sung!
Really nice flow to this piece. Good instrumentation. I really like the way it builds. Really good hook. Good smooth sound from start to finish.
It sounds like a song with the vocals stripped out. But there's some use for these type of songs in movies or TV.
I can hear some Beatles influence in the chord progression which is always a good thing IMO!