Good song. Needs dynamics or key change...

The song is great, the mix is good. My only concern is that it sounds like I'm listening to this on an AM radio. Really good work, Uncle

I really like the overall feel of the song and the verse melody. However, for me, the chorus is let down by a very unusual choice of chord at 00.34 and 01.30 and similar places elsewhere. I listened several times and this part of the chorus became a focal point for me detracting from a song which I am enjoying more each time I play it.
It is only my opinion but I think it's worth re-recording the song with a more chord in the chorus. I really do like the song and think it has a future. Good work.