The electric guitar in particular creates a nice dreamy vibe. Reminds me a bit of things I love from the 80s.

I liked it, a calm but alarming feel to it, kinda like a Phil Collins lost love type feeling, the piano part was a bit loud but it can always be fixed, perhaps a final mix down is necessary, just to be sure everything is on the correct level. other than that, I like the beat, it broke down which gives your artist a chance to work with it and really tell a story.
yes, I can definitely hear a soft yet real, tear provoking song to this beat. keep going.

It does remind me of something you'd hear in passing during a RPG video game. Potentially while on a quest to find objects or something to that sort. I didn't relate anything in the song in particular to other things I've heard before

I'd classify this song as Easy Listening. It seems to me to be a background track, something to listen to with a nice easy-going feel. Nice instrumentation, very laid back. Peaceful and pleasant.

The hook is ok but the total song needs more. Drum machine sounds outdated

Not enough presence. More fullness & less empty space

Nice mellow tune. I can zone out too it and I like zoning out to music (who doesn't?) so that's good. I like how you kept it simple, many times that is the right approach. I can see this being used in a movie where some guy is walking in the city contemplating things. It would be really good for something like that. I heard songs like this plenty of times where that is the case (character walks out his door, along the river or a downtown street at night fading into the next scene.

Nice little ditty...calm and fun