This was a bit misleading finding it in the R&B - Soul section. This didn't sound or feel like ANYthing R&B or SOUL, felt more new edge folky type jazzish. I feel like this would be something in an independent film. Other than that, not a lot to say, but interesting in its own unique way
The right singer over this could make it a pop hit.
I think this song has real nice potential with a stronger melody going through it. It sounds like the basic idea is there and like the arrangement.
I love the vibe
Good Melody and arrangement of song.
Instrumental version of a vocal tune? Difficult to score with conviction as it is.
The chorus portion of the instrumental is catchy. Soloing that portion at the tail end of the instrumental will help to emphasize it a bit more.
I think I can get a sense of what they were going for here with the overall arrangement. I think the song has potential with the right tweaks.
The music reminds me of some of the music from the early 70's. You have a good feel for this style of music. Your chord choices are good and your concept for this song is good as well.
could work in a movie/tv cue spot. some good guitar in spots.
as an all musical song, it has a folk feel due to the guitar but not R&B soul. Could be a POP blues song with a vocal added to it. Nice drums to off set the music and good clean sounds...
sounds like the disco period of lou rawls....
The song has a nice tempo, flow to it.
Sounds widely off-key and even out of time to my stupid ears.
Has a pleasant vibe to it.
You have a good idea for the song.
It's a very very pretty song! And I actually like it.
None. Very bad recording and instruments out of tune.