Your song is very well done with a catchy, droning melody, which is what catches me first. All instrumentation and studio work is flawless. Excellent vocals that fit the mood and lyrics. The subject, "thinks she's a vampire," and references to partying, sleeping all day, are almost cliche, but the reference to it being a charade pulls the lyrics out and gives the song a strong meaning. Overall it's excellent and enjoyable.
This song reminds me of 80s movie stuff like Beverly hills cop, I think it is the drums and sax.
Interesting tune. In a good way. Not sure if the song belongs in the Gothic genre though. I could be wrong. The lyrics have a Gothic quality to them. The vocalist has an interesting approach to singing and his melody's were good. The instrumentation was solid as was the recording.
Cool, mystical sounding tune with a cool steady beat. Instrumentation here is top-notch and arrangement is great. Vocalist greatly helps along the scary effect of this piece.
The vocals are very goo. I like the instrumentation. I think the dual guitar parts are really nice. The rhythm is good. I like the wind in the beginning. The spoken voice in the background is a nice touch.