Not bad, however, the melody could be stronger. Sounds a bit like Lou Reedish.
This is a good love-lost song. You can really hear the regret in your voice. I can understand all the lyrics. Meter and structure of the lyrics is very consistent. Very impassioned delivery. I really like the intro and the instrumentation. Backup vocals are great, and complement the song well.
I was reviewing this earlier and the site locked up on me. So I was really happy to have this pop back up on random review. Hopefully you didn't get a half review from me.
Love this thing, vocals match the lyrical imagery perfectly. As they are a bit creepy especially the background vocals. Overall arrangement is wonderful, minimal instrumentation but still strong. But with that said, would love to have a bigger kick in face at the end.
Nice song. Different arrangement.