Lots of great playing here. Loads of dynamic in the track. I can hear this in TV and movies all day long. Very pro sounding. This song should do well.

Working on the lyrics, eh? I understand. With excellent instrumentation and an an arrangement like this, you really want to tailor the lyrics to really fit the mood and that takes rewriting and time. I'm interested in hearing the melody line you've come up for this. So far this is looming, intense, and engaging with the musical emotion you've created.

all i can say is one hell of a job man !!!!! are you for hire ????? i'd love to hear more of your stuff ! !finally there is someone who is actually playing the insturment not a computer ! great job ! no lik ei said one hell of a job !!!