A little bit Josh Groben. thats a compliment
You had me with that opening and closing. Cool seventies vibe.I loved the vocals, piano and singing. Great storytelling. Did you like specific instrumental parts--vocals and piano 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? yes.