Original Music

Great backup. $ somewhere. Like the hook. Interesting voice.

I liked the flute or clarinet in the intro, it had a happy melody.

Had some difficulty understanding the words in verse 1. Nice intro. Happy feel which obviously is what the 'song' is about, work a bit on the rhyme scheme and developing images and diction so that we know what you're singing about. Also, try some auto tune or work on pitch as it went flat in the end. Like what you're saying about attitude, like abe lincoln said, "We're about as happy as we choose to be." Song needs work and development , a good start.

Why so short? Hard to evaluate.