I loved the vocals,and drums. Did you like specific instrumental parts--vocals and guitar 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? yes 3) Is my melody interesting? yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? somewhat
I liked the introduction, the playing was interesting. The hook was good, I enjoyed the lyrics.